The Treachery of Beautiful Things Book Review

The trees had swallowed Tom whole.

-pg 3

The Treachery of Beautiful Things by Ruth Frances Long 

It’s been a long time since I’ve reviewed a book, I know. But it’s been even longer since I last read one. I don’t know why but they’re a lot harder to come by in college. Also, I’m just waiting on a lot of books to be released?

Okay so anyways, in this book a girl named Jenny and her older brother Tom are walking by some woods while Tom coaxes some rad tunes out of his flute. His masterful playing attracts some wicked folk and, like the quote says, the woods gobble him up. Jenny goes home and tries to explain this to her mother. She is called crazy, of course, and several psychiatrists later, she is kinda starting to believe that this was all some weird dream. But then one day she hears Tom’s radical music snaking out from the same ol’ woods that swallowed him. Jenny (she’s a bright girl) decides to follow the music see if she can find Tom and bring him home. This plan, of course, does not go well.

So Jenny’s wandering through the woods gettin’ into all kinds of trouble when Jack, a guardian of the divide between the faerie world and the human world, finds her. Initially he wants to get her out of his woods but then he decides she’s kinda hot and also he strikes some deals with various forest kings and queens and he ends up accompanying Jenny on her hunt for Tom.

Jack and Jenny share narration of the story. Jenny is very average. I can’t really say that there was anything outstanding about her except that she can’t stand firm with her beliefs to save her life. The number of times she changed her mind about how she felt towards Jack was killer. And I don’t mean I love him/I don’t love him flip-flopping. But like, he’s good/he’s evil. Seriously, Jenny. He wasn’t that deep. Obviously he wasn’t a bad dude.

As for Jack, he is initially someone you want to hang out with because he’s got a cool job (guarding the edge). He reminded me a bit of Peter Pan. Immortal. Young. Probably hot. The author makes him especially dreamy by having him pine for his freedom by tying wishes, in the form of white strips of cloth, onto a tree.

Sigh.

Jenny falls for this. Their romance isn’t overly saccharine, but it is obvious. Even when the odds are stacked against them, it’s hardly a question of  will they be together but when. I’ll admit, though, I thought it was cute. Nothing special, but cute.

Okay got a little distracted there. Back to Jack’s character. He’s you’re typical immortal forest guardian, though as the story goes on he gets a little dreary. I’m not a fan of characters who agonize over decisions they’ve made (the Do I Help Jenny decision). I mean, I understand a little regret, and I suppose if the character was anal-retentive this would have made sense. But it did not line up with the personality that was already established. What made this particular trait more frustrating was that the story never really explained what the negative repercussions were for helping Jenny, or breaking one of his many allegiances, which begs the question, why agonize over them? Moreover, it never fully explained the roles of those people with whom he had those allegiances. Are you getting confused? Well, now you understand me while I was reading this book.

The rest of the story follows suit. It had some really cool mythology lingering on the sides and an interesting concept, but was bogged down by the romantic aspects, which tended to take center stage more than they should have, an unnecessarily twisty plot, and excessive description. I  remember there was this part towards the end, where Jenny was trying to save the day, and I honestly had no idea what was going on. There were lots of boxes? And hundreds of Jacks? I mean, my understanding was really a moot point anyways since I’d already guessed what was going to happen. I’m not saying this not as some cocky book-psychic. I don’t want to come off as elitist or all knowing (though I am both). (No I’m kidding; I’m not.) I’m just trying to make a point that there was some good source material here and that it did not live up to its full potential; instead it got confusing and predictable.

And the plot. It was doing leaps and tumbles and going places when I just wanted it to follow a path. There were quests and then quests within quests, which, lemme say, I am not a fan of. Like, calm down Mckayla Maroney; I’m not going to dock you points for a linear plot. Sometimes simple, especially when you have a strong setting and mythology to draw on, is better.

I just re-read this review and realized I never mentioned Tom, Jenny’s brother, again. I wish I could fix this but what to say? I have no idea what happened to him.

Basically, this book had me thinking it was going to be a wicked romp through some traditional (and maybe unexplored) mythology. It started off quite well– the writing purely in terms of words was good– but as the book wore on, reading it became more laborious and while I didn’t lose interest per se, I definitely lost patience. It became confusing and the end was so terribly predictable that I can’t even call it satisfying. It had such potential! And sometimes that’s a worse taste than something obviously mundane.

Ri’s Rating:

QQ.5/QQQQQ
2.5/5


0. Couldn’t get past chapter one for fear of wanting to kill myself. Book induced suicide…

1: Yuck. Ew. Below Average. Probably didn’t even read the middle and skipped to the end.

2. Ok. Would’ve been better if I’d written the ending and everything else.

3. Not bad at all. Very enjoyable. Quite nice. Recommendable.

4. My kind of book. Near ideal, but something was a little off (annoying names, bad ending, that sort of thing).

5. WOW. Makes me wonder why people watch T.V when this is out there. Really liked it. Don’t expect to see this often.

6 and above. What I want my book to be.

Born Wicked Book Review

Everybody knows Cate Cahill and her sisters are eccentric. Too pretty, too reclusive, and far too educated for their own good. But the truth is even worse: they’re witches. And if their secret is discovered by the priests of the Brotherhood, it would mean an asylum, a prison ship – or an early grave.

-Amazon Book Description

Born Wicked by Jessica Spotswood

Okay so I tried to update, but I don’t know why it takes me so long. I have all these notes and it’s not even hard. So I apologize. For the delay? I don’t even know what I’m saying any more. Let’s just get on to the review.

I really liked this book. When I first started it I questioned why I was reading it. Wasn’t it just going to be another pathetic paranormal romance? Filled with overused tropes and lacking in plot?

Oh was I wrong. This is the story of three young witches who are trying to keep their secret hidden in a world where having magical powers would get them killed by the Brotherhood, a religious sect that controls the area. To add a little more crazy into Cate’s (the eldest sister, our main character, and narrator) life, she only has a few months left before she must choose who she is going to marry, or if she’d rather become the equivalent of a nun in the Sisterhood. Making her choice complex is her childhood sweetheart returned home and Finn, her gardener and fellow suspect in the eyes of the Brotherhood.

From that summary, yeah it may sound a little typical. But it’s so well executed that old becomes new and I was too caught up in the story to really think, ugg love triangle? Actually, while we’re on the subject, I was happy to see that the love triangle isn’t exactly what you expect. Initially, I was all for the childhood sweetheart, but as the story progressed (and as Cate got to know him better) I became more intrigued with Finn. It isn’t actually a conflict of loving both of them; she knows who she likes more.  Her decision is between a life of a love and a life of safety. As the leader of the house, she also has to ensure that her sister will be okay, so you can start to see why it isn’t easy for her to drop everything and follow her heart.

From the details in the setting, I want to say that this story takes place in New England America, and I’d like to say it’s around the turn of the century, but it’s hard to be sure. Mostly because the signs are subtle, and because the author has picked and chosen aspects of certain times that she likes best. There’s Salem Witch Trial-esque happens, and but chaperones seem to be required, but technology is slack and the fashions seems a little outdated. But maybe that’s the Brotherhood’s doing?

Regardless, I kind of loved that you can’t place it exactly because then the author is competing with any preconceived notions. She has the freedom to make rules as she likes, and I guess that’s in what made this such a fun read. Sometimes, especially when books are set in the past, I get hot and bothered over historical inaccuracies; if they’re using folklore or legends, I don’t like it when they get the stories wrong.But here, Spotswood set her own standards for what was acceptable or not in this society and it makes the tale believable. Her characters aren’t stuck speaking in a weird mush of old and modern, which was great.

The fantastical elements also blend well. I’m not a huge fan of characters discovering their powers, and I kind of liked the way the sisters were aware of what they could do and how the younger ones were frustrated by not being able to learn more. One thing that was handled nicely was the use of magic, because it seems like hey if you have magical powers, you really shouldn’t have any problems. Because you can just magic them all away.

But magic was logical here and when I thought, why don’t they just use their powers now, they did. And when they shouldn’t have, they didn’t. Lovely.

There’s a lot of mystery here due to the Brotherhood, the side characters, and lore of the book. Background is slowly revealed (with good pacing) and I felt like this tale has solid roots, you know? Like, the author thought about this a bit before writing it down.

I really enjoyed Cate as a character. She was intelligent, very family oriented, and focused. I liked her story; I liked this book. I even liked the cover a lot.  I am actually pretty excited for the next one in the series and I hope that the author can keep this up. Invest a few days in this one, guys. So worth it.

Ri’s Rating:

QQQ.5/QQQQQ
3.5/5


0. Couldn’t get past chapter one for fear of wanting to kill myself. Book induced suicide…

1: Yuck. Ew. Below Average. Probably didn’t even read the middle and skipped to the end.

2. Ok. Would’ve been better if I’d written the ending and everything else.

3. Not bad at all. Very enjoyable. Quite nice. Recommendable.

4. My kind of book. Near ideal, but something was a little off (annoying names, bad ending, that sort of thing).

5. WOW. Makes me wonder why people watch T.V when this is out there. Really liked it. Don’t expect to see this often.

6 and above. What I want my book to be.

A Million Suns Book Review

“Eldest lied to you,” Marae says calmly, “because we lied to him.”

-pg 6

Book 1

A Million Suns by Beth Revis

This book was good. Let me tell you how good it was.

So last we saw Elder and Amy, they had just discovered that Godspeed, bound for a new earth deep in space, was not moving. They had also just killed the Eldest (the leader at the time), making Elder (who was next in line) in charge. The story picks up just a few months after the last one, with everyone desperate to find answers to their questions. How can we get off this ship? Can we get it moving? How long can we last out here? What will happen to us?

Moving along with perfect pacing, the story addresses issues of government, leadership, society, and also the laws of physics. That last one especially– if the revelations at the end of the last book had you questioning the author’s intelligence, don’t worry: it was duly addressed!

As for the other problems, well, I think they are what make this book so strong. Not many dystopias actually have the characters– and you– questioning the effectiveness of different forms of government. Is keeping your people content bread and games worth the loss of individual freedoms? To what extent does democracy work? And most importantly, what makes a good leader?

For each concept, we see both Amy and Elder’s reactions to their often different opinions on the subject. And I loved the way Revis wrote their actions. Because Elder is just a kid. He’s like 16 or 17. Amy is about the same. They are young, but leadership and impossible decisions are thrust upon them. They rise to the challenge with startling realism. They make mistakes. They don’t always figure everything out in time. Everything Elder and Amy did was so perfectly real and the emotions they conveyed poked at my heart. I feel like I really know them.

I was at times angry and frustrated with them, but in a loving kind of way. I am way too emotionally invested in this story. It matters a lot to me whether or not these characters live or die.

One thing I especially like about Amy and Elder is that neither is a particular stereotype. They are kind of regular people, whose opinions are derived logically from their positions and experiences in life. I like that they don’t always agree and I really loved the dynamic between them. Some romances were meant to be– but what really stood out to me was Amy’s questioning of whether or not she liked Elder because sheliked Elderor because he was the only other teenager on the ship. It was interesting to watch her evolve.

And while we’re on the romance, I would like to point out this book’s lack of convinient make-out scenes. They were never forced in to small places together or left alone for unreasonable amounts of time. Things happened very…naturally between them.

I’d also like to address the fact that Amy was almost raped in the last book (for those of you who haven’t read it, the scene isn’t graphic, and is handled with tact; it’s not a reason to forgo the book). She is still dealing with the aftereffects of that (because who wouldn’t?) and it does play a role in her relationship with Elder. I thought this was very important makes it makes this issue out to be, well an issue. It doesn’t trivialize it down to a plot trope. Snaps for Revis.

Another fantastic element of this book was space. Space is always cool, and I loved that Revis set her dystopia out there. It makes it so much more unique, especially because they are so isolated. A lot of times in dystopias, there is the dystopian nation and like random wilderness surrounding it. It doesn’t make sense– where did the other 5 billion people go? But here, it is carefully thought out. Almost like in experiment in human nature. And the way Revis addresses space, the fact that she makes it so beautiful and haunting, makes the setting even cooler.

Revis in general is pretty good at world-building. The scope of Godspeed is thought out nicely, with little details (like the way the people on the ship speak) that make her story believable.

If I had to choose one thing that really sealed the deal on this book for me, I’d definitely say it was the fact that a seemingly typical dystopian plot was subsidized by a stronger over arching goal– they were on a mission to colonize a new planet. This mission drives a lot of the mystery and secrets and pulls the plot along nicely.

As for the ending, lemme just say that I never saw it coming. It was brilliant. It basically reinforced my belief that this book most certainly did not suffer from the middle-book doldrums.

There was one more thing that I wanted to say about this book, but I can’t remember now because at 18 years of age I am apparently losing my mind. While I’m still lucid, I’m going to give you one last piece of advice:

Read this series.

Ri’s Rating:

QQQQ/QQQQQ
4/5


0. Couldn’t get past chapter one for fear of wanting to kill myself. Book induced suicide…

1: Yuck. Ew. Below Average. Probably didn’t even read the middle and skipped to the end.

2. Ok. Would’ve been better if I’d written the ending and everything else.

3. Not bad at all. Very enjoyable. Quite nice. Recommendable.

4. My kind of book. Near ideal, but something was a little off (annoying names, bad ending, that sort of thing).

5. WOW. Makes me wonder why people watch T.V when this is out there. Really liked it. Don’t expect to see this often.

6 and above. What I want my book to be.

The Space Between Book Review

I’ve seen the picture many times before, but now it bothers me and I sit looking up at it, looking up at Dark Dreadful, and the vengeful face of Azrael. Like something is getting closer and I just don’t see it yet.

-pg 12

The Space Between by Brenna Yovanoff

Daphne, the daughter of Lucifer and Lilith, has spent her entire life in Pandemonium, a city in Hell. She has everything she wants, and yet finds her life lacking any kind of color. Her demon sisters spend their days tempting young men and her brother, Obie, is a collector of souls. One day, Obie—Lilith’s child from Adam—announces to her that he is going to live on earth because, of all things, he has fallen in love. With a half human girl who understands his half human lifestyle. So he’s leaving Hell, which is unheard of. And also dangerous.

Daphne begs him not to go. He goes anyways. And is immediately struck by misfortune. The moment he goes missing, Daphne decides to go after him. Partially on her mother’s request, but mostly because he’s the only person in Hell, besides Beelzebub (one of her father’s high ranked workers that oversees Obie’s job) that she likes.

So Daphne sets off, even though Beelzebub warned her not to. She starts with the last person she had seen Obie with— a boy called Truman. Truman had, a year ago, made a trip down to hell because he tried to kill himself. He came down the day Obie was leaving (a moment for Obie and Daphne is a year for poor Truman) and Beelzebub sent him back up for a second chance at life at what Daphne’s thinks is a favor for her. So Truman departs with Obie, and then Obie goes missing, making Truman the last person to have seen him.

So Truman and Daphne embark on a search for Obie and the results are wonderfully shocking.

I really need to say this— I love Yovanoff’s writing. She’s seriously skilled. One of those people that has the ability to weave a tale together with the perfect choice of words and phrasing. All of her characters— Daphne, her sisters, Truman— came to life and they feel so real to me.

She alternates narration with Daphne as the main focus in first person, and  Truman’s point of view told on third person. This was a perfect balance. It kept Daphne focal, but Truman’s story was touching and needed to be told and explored separately. Normally, I wouldn’t like this because the switching of perspectives, etc, etc. But because she went from first person narration to third, it was easy to discern who the narrator of the chapter was, which made it easy to follow and very enjoyable. Also, I think she chose the perfect narrator for each chapter. The voice always suited the scene.

And yes, Daphne and Truman had different voices because they had different problems. Daphne was half demon (Lilith) and half angel (Lucifer, the rebel angel cast out of Heaven). She wanted to find her brother, please her mother, explore earth, and eventually love Truman. She struggled against her demon instinct that made her want to be like her man-lovin’ sisters who were selfish (but they were just demons after all). She was demure and innocent in so many ways, but found her ground and her power.

Truman— well, we know what his problem was. After his mother died, he was depressed. He tried to kill himself. He visited Hell, and was sent back. He’s struggled with alcohol and his sadness for a year. When he reunited with Daphne, it’s not easy for him. He’s accepting of what she is because, well, he’d seen it with his own eyes. But he isn’t ready to jump on the Obie Search Wagon right off the bat because he doesn’t know Daphne. It takes time for his relationship with her to develop. And during that time, he and Daphne truly became memorable characters.

And I think that’s part of what makes Yovanoff’s writing so good. She creates these flawed characters that are resolutely human in emotions if not race, and she makes you get so attached to them. Just by experiencing their stories. No cheap gimmicks, glittering skin, sympathetic. I loved the characters because of who they were, and how they faced their flaws.

I might as well just say it here too— the romance in this book was perfect. The book isn’t a romance— it’s a story that just happens to have romance in it, and a story where love does wonderful things.

Another part of Yovanoff’s brilliance is the way she creates a world. So after I read this book, I Wikipediaed everything about Heaven and God and Lilith and Lucifer and the War of Heaven and I have to say— that’s some sweet source material. Like, it’s really, really, interesting and the characters are already fascinating. But the way Yovanoff evolves them and uses them makes them more approachable and there, in the room with you.

For instance, there’s the archangel Azrael, the angel of death. His job is to kill the demons. Normally, that’d seem like a good thing. But when your main character is a demon girl who’s rightly terrified of Azreal’s power (and his monster, Dark Dreadful), it casts him in a different light. Yet Yovanoff doesn’t try to force out sympathetic feelings for Daphne’s kind. After all, they’re sort of wicked. But it made the story different. And her characterization of Azrael had me turning on lights in the scenes where he appeared because I was scared too.

This is an incredibly long review, and I’m still not done. Wow.

So beside the simple depth that Yovanoff weaves into her story, there’s also this wonderful thing called pacing where everything happens at just the right time and the story never felt boring or slow or rushed or whatever. It just flowed and the characters took over and played their roles and I was completely engrossed.

The ending came in slowly and it shocked me. Without giving anything away, I’ll state that my one critique for this book was that that way Lucifer punishes the traitor seemed— over the top? Sure he had betrayed him to work with Azrael, but death for one of your oldest comrades? Then again, it’s the devil we’re talking about. So maybe harsh is just his deal.

But as for twists and turns and unexpectedness and originality in the ending? A+ job. It was all very believable and worked within the context of the story.

To end this, I’ll just say that this was a refreshing piece of literature. I’ve been snowed in and reading a lot, and there have been ups and downs, but this book really stood out to me. It’s not a literary classic, but it’s such a good story, I would say it’s even worthy buying. It takes some classic religion and does wonderful, unexpected things with it, and it completely blows any other angel-quasi-religious stuff out of the water (including that Hush Hush series. Pales in comparison). Simply put, it’s a perfect example of a very good book.

Ri’s Rating:

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4/5


0. Couldn’t get past chapter one for fear of wanting to kill myself. Book induced suicide…

1: Yuck. Ew. Below Average. Probably didn’t even read the middle and skipped to the end.

2. Ok. Would’ve been better if I’d written the ending and everything else.

3. Not bad at all. Very enjoyable. Quite nice. Recommendable.

4. My kind of book. Near ideal, but something was a little off (annoying names, bad ending, that sort of thing).

5. WOW. Makes me wonder why people watch T.V when this is out there. Really liked it. Don’t expect to see this often.

6 and above. What I want my book to be.

The Near Witch Book Review

If the wind calls at night,

You must not listen,

The wind is lonely,

And always looking

For company.

-front flap 

The Near Witch by Victoria Schwab

Well. I’m writing this on a Mac. I hate Macs. But I hate the idea of getting my computer more. So we’ll roll with this.

Lexi is a young girl, living with her mother and sister in a small village on the Moor called Near. In Near, there are no strangers. Yet one blustery night, a mysterious boy appears with the wind and is gone as quickly as Lexi spies him. When children start disappearing, the boy comes under suspicion. After all, there are no strangers in Near. Lexi hunts the boy down and he insists he’s innocent and implores her to help him. Lexi, understanding that something darker and deeper is at work on the moor, joins forces with the boy to protect him from the outraged townsfolk.

This book starts with a chilling bedtime story– that of the Moor Witch and the wind– which is sort of like the excerpt I posted. The story is told by Lexi, the first person narrator of the book, and her words are lyrical and haunting. I started this book at night and Lexi’s tale of the Moor Witch had me closing the windows and curling up deeper under my covers.

After Lexi tells the story (it’s a bedtime story for her younger sister), she looks out the window and sees a boy. But before she can really look at him though, he disappears with the wind. Spooky.

The story progresses, as I’ve described, with the children vanishing and the boy under suspicion and it’s all very well written. The language was simple, but it tingled, like cold fingers running up your spine. The plot itself was very engaging; a quiet little mystery, that captures you through the characters involved.

The book was relatively short, but I thought that I got a good look at everyone in the tale, except for maybe Lexi. She’s a little typical– a lot like Katniss, and as a first person narrator she really only narrates, without giving much of her own opinion or thoughts. I wouldn’t call this a bad thing necessarily because the story she does tell us is probably more interesting than her waxing poetic about the mysterious boy.

Speaking of, you could probably guess that this book was going to have a little romance in it. I mean, boys that disappear with the wind are my favorite kind of boys. How could you not love them? (Actually, the town has little trouble despising him, so maybe it’s just me. And Lexi.) The love story was not overwhelming, nor did it distract from the main plot. In fact, it is sort of what set things in motion. It was sweet and nothing happened randomly (no unnecessary arguments or love triangles) and it tied itself off nicely at the end of the story.

The end of the overall plot was well paced and it made since within the context of the story; however, say this was made into a film– in that case, it would probably seem a little weak.

I just realized what this book reminds me of– A Miyazaki movie. Have you seen them? Spirited Away, Howl’s Moving Castle, Princess Mononoke? All very, very, very good films. Typical of Miyazaki movies are strong female leads and a story that doesn’t try to define good and evil, but focuses on the how different types of people react to the same situation. That’s what this book was. Quiet, and fantasy based, yet realistic because of the people in it.

This is probably one of my shorter reviews…certainly a lot shorter than the ones I posted earlier. But, I don’t really have much criticism for this book. It was exactly the right length, and while it’s kind of a one-time read, I would definitely suggest it. It won’t take up much time (or space; the book is small) and I think it would be a rather enjoyable way to spend the evening.

Ri’s Rating:

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3/5


0. Couldn’t get past chapter one for fear of wanting to kill myself. Book induced suicide…

1: Yuck. Ew. Below Average. Probably didn’t even read the middle and skipped to the end.

2. Ok. Would’ve been better if I’d written the ending and everything else.

3. Not bad at all. Very enjoyable. Quite nice. Recommendable.

4. My kind of book. Near ideal, but something was a little off (annoying names, bad ending, that sort of thing).

5. WOW. Makes me wonder why people watch T.V when this is out there. Really liked it. Don’t expect to see this often.

6 and above. What I want my book to be.

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